Riley's Story: The New Dog

Riley is wanting a dog so badly.  She has dreams about having a dog and wakes up so happy.  Telling us that she is so happy when she dreams about having a dog.

Tonight she wrote a story with her own illustrations.

Title Page says "The New Dog"  by Riley

"Onse there lived a gril. "I wish i had a dog" seid The grils. Ther mother herd what they seid. She herd the grils she seid to the grils "Why Downt we go get won" she said. "yes" seid the grils so they did on they walked down down down finley they were thar "What kind of dog shod whe get a poodley?"

So they got a poodley.

then some meny (mean) grils arived. "Hi" seid the grils.

"so what" seid one
"How kars (who cares)" seid the secend
"How (who) wants to take care of you" seid the tered
"How likes you" seid the last one.
they went away spiting (sticking) thar tungs (tongues) out.
and saying "we dont like you" they seid.


As Jeremy put it, there are two themes in the story:  dogs and mean girls.  She's dealing with some mean girls at gymnastics and wants a dog so the story fits right along with what is going on.  Love that she wrote this.  The illustrations are priceless too.